Was there a dissent or concurrence?
Given the feedback that you received last week, revise the Issue, procedure, and the fact section.
For the Procedure section, simply advise what happened in the lower courts. Who won below and in which court?
The Issue should contain the law and facts and be in the form of a question.
Was there a dissent or concurrence?
Feedback: For the Fact section, you need to set forth what happened that brought the plaintiff to file a legal action. Who did what to whom? The key to the fact section is that anyone can read that section and understand what the case is all about. This section should be concise and the parties should be easily identifiable.
You should be stating what happened to plaintiffs. Why did they file this lawsuit. Who is the plaintiff?