identify at least 3 of the issues in the first section 5.1-5.8 that are occurring in your writing (highlight them with underline or bold).

Read through the following link on precise and concise reading and do the following:
1. Find a piece of your own writing (a paragraph or two) from a previous writing class that you think could use editing and cut and paste it into the portal. Then identify at least 3 of the issues in the first section 5.1-5.8 that are occurring in your writing (highlight them with underline or bold).
2. Revise at least two of the sentences using the advice from the reading that includes the issues identified above and replaces verbs using the verb strength chart 5.9.
3. Provide the older version and then the new version, explaining what was changed.
This is the link for the reading https://oer.pressbooks.pub/howdyorhello/chapter/precise-and-concise-wording/